๐ช My Son’s a Murderer by Spencer Guerrero — A Good Story Trapped in a Rough Draft ⭐1/2 (1.5 Stars)
⚠️ Trigger Warnings
Murder / graphic violence
Sexual assault / abuse (including minors)
Child exploitation
Domestic abuse
Suicide
Parental trauma
๐จ Spoiler Warning
This is a FULL spoiler review + complete plot breakdown of My Son’s a Murderer — including the ending. If you don’t want to know who the killer is… turn back now ๐
๐ค My Honest Thoughts (aka… what went wrong?)
Okay. Let’s talk about this.
This book had a really strong premise — like, grabby, bingeable, “I need to know what happened” kind of strong. A mother trying to prove her son isn’t a killer? I’m in. Immediately.
And to be fair… I was invested. I kept reading because I genuinely wanted answers.
BUT.
The execution? ๐ฌ
The writing is very rough — grammar issues, typos, continuity problems
Dialogue feels robotic and unnatural (no one talks like this, I promise)
The word “said” is doing Olympic-level heavy lifting
And the biggest issue for me: the police work makes zero sense
Like… arresting a high school student publicly…
๐ without a body
๐ without solid evidence
๐ in front of the entire school
Absolutely not. That’s not how this works. That’s not how any of this works ๐ญ
It constantly pulled me out of the story.
And honestly? The overall vibe feels like a first draft that skipped editing — which makes sense since this is Guerrero’s debut. But still… it needed more polish before being published.
๐ Plot Summary (FULL Spoilers + Ending Explained)
๐ช The Setup: A Murder in Blackwood Forest
The story kicks off with the brutal murder of Henry Cain, a popular high school athlete. He’s stabbed, thrown off a cliff, and his phone is destroyed. The killer plans to frame someone else.
๐ Immediately, we know this is going to be messy.
๐ฉ๐ฆ Meet Sonya — The Mother in Denial
Sonya Salvador, a high school English teacher, is told her son Ethan is a suspect:
His fingerprints were on Henry
Witnesses saw them fighting
Sonya is best friends with Henry's mom Veronica
Sonya? Not having it. She’s fully in “my son would never” mode.
๐ซ High School Drama… But Darker
At Skyview High, we learn:
Henry was a menace (harassment, assault, protected by his rich dad ๐)
He targeted Ethan’s girlfriend, Layla
Multiple students feared him
Meanwhile, another student, Jonathan Locke, is arrested and immediately points the finger at Ethan.
๐ฉ Chaos begins.
๐ง♂️ The Body Is Found… and Things Escalate Fast
A search party finds Henry’s body.
And in a move that made me pause and stare into the void…
๐ Ethan is publicly arrested at school
Again. No. That’s not how arrests work. But okay. We push forward.
⚖️ Evidence… or Something Like It
A box cutter is found in Ethan’s locker
There’s blood on his hands (explained… kind of)
His alibi is shaky
But then…
๐ฅ Plot twist:
Security footage shows Jonathan planted the weapon
So who’s pulling the strings?
๐ณ Enter Mr. Griffin (and it gets DARK)
Sonya suspects teacher Mr. Griffin, and she’s actually… onto something.
Turns out:
Griffin is abusing students
He forced Jonathan to plant evidence
His computer contains child exploitation material
๐จ He is arrested — but NOT for murder.
๐งฌ Family Secrets Start Exploding
Now things get very soap-opera-meets-thriller:
Henry was secretly Felix’s son (Felix, Sonya's ex-husband, had an affair with Henry's mom Veronica)
Henry had a DNA test proving the father-son relationship
He was planning to expose it
Meanwhile:
Felix’s blood is found on the weapon (planted by Felix)
He confesses to the murder
Case closed?
LOL. No.
๐ฑ The Real Twist
In the final reveal…
๐ Ethan confesses to Sonya
He killed Henry.
Why?
Henry taunted him with the DNA secret
Insulted Layla
Had a history of being abusive
Ethan snapped.
He:
Used Griffin’s box cutter
Killed Henry
Threw him off the cliff
And Felix?
๐ Took the fall to protect his son.
๐ง The Ending
Sonya chooses to protect Ethan’s secret ๐คฏ
Felix goes to prison
Griffin is killed in prison by Felix (honestly… poetic)
Sonya and Ethan live on… carrying the truth
And just like that…
๐ Justice is… questionable at best.
๐ Final Verdict
This is the most frustrating kind of book for me because:
๐ The story itself? Pretty solid.
๐ The execution? Not ready.
If this had been heavily edited, tightened up, and made more realistic… it could’ve easily been a 3.5–4 star thriller.
Instead, the writing issues dragged it way down.
⭐ Rating Breakdown
Story: ⭐⭐⭐✨ (3.5)
Writing: ⭐
Realism: ๐ซ
Overall: ⭐✨ (1.5 — and yes, that’s generous)
๐ If You Liked the Concept, Try These Instead
If you want that “is my child capable of murder?” tension done really well:
Defending Jacob by William Landay
We Need to Talk About Kevin by Lionel Shriver
The Push by Ashley Audrain
Local Woman Missing by Mary Kubica
Saving Noah by Lucinda Berry
๐ฌ Final Thoughts
I really wanted to love this one. I stayed for the mystery, I finished for the truth… but I struggled the whole way there.
That said — I did read Guerrero’s newer book (Locked in a Stranger’s Room), and there’s clear improvement ๐ So I’m actually curious to see how he grows as a writer.
Because the storytelling potential? It’s there.
It just needs a serious edit. ๐

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